Tuesday, 12 February 2013

Plot - Slight Changes

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Other possible plots were made, however, I decided to scrap them as I develop it into a better one, unfortunatley I left those plots unrecorded so they are lost.

However, here is the non-final draft anyway cause you're awesome :D

Norman, an everyday example of a teenager who just cant fit in socially with everyone else, he gets bullied, and is disliked by teachers for laziness.

One day, he gets followed by a gang of bullies on the way home, he gets pulled into a park near his home that he always goes to, sitting on the bench alone to reflect in his isolation, and gets beaten up by the bullies and robs him of his belongings.

He walks to his bench again only to see a mysteriously dressed woman parasol sitting next to his spot in the "isolation bench" and gets asked how his day was.

After a brief conversation and introduction by the woman, he is told about three wishes she will grant him.

He wishes for the whole world to go away, this then gets granted and he wakes up in his bedroom with the alarm blaring.

He notices then that hes late for school, but wonders why this time his parents arent scolding him.

He wanders outside to see that the usually busy streets are empty and realizes that the strange conversation with the parasol lady wasnt a dream, and that it actually happened.

Months pass by and Norman enjoys looting sprees, enjoying latest consoles his parents couldnt afford before and other things such as the free food that he mindlessly devours.

After another month, Norman grows bored and increasingly realizes regret of further isolation.

He spends a week staying a the isolation bench reflecting about his loneliness whilst waiting for the parasol lady to appear next to him at the same time.

Finally, at his birthday, he takes a gun and contemplates suicide, that is briefly interrupted by the doorbell.

He looks through the peephole to see that it is the parasol lady...

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